Your drums n percussion are great. as for the melody... It's VERY, very bubbly. Like Disney levels of bubbly; not even trying to be an ass.
It's not about what I like, if the production is good its good. If its what you tried to go for, then you produced well. Quality of vision and outcome is what I look for when I listen.
im lowkey bipolar when it comes to music. I take it hella serious sometimes and other times i just mess around