wooow this song is sexy asf!!! the vocals r great!!!!
![Cover of track Overcast by archangel [快]](https://api.audiotool.com/track/0nbjnfxyjkhp/cover/512.jpg)
Got together with a close friend of mine and wrote a song... and put it to a track :) (He wrote the lyrics)
First time trying this sort of thing, so let me know what your thoughts are, and any help on mixing vocals & stuff along those lines would be greatly appreciated!!!!!
Lyrics:
Overcast
Gray skies/ cold nights/ wondering if I can make things right.
Closed eyes/ time flies/ wish I could say that I was surprised.
Tell me if there is another way.
We could move the clouds to see the day.
Hanging on to every word you say.
And now my blue skies are turning to gray.
It's overcast
No this can't last
You tell me let it go and put it in the past.
It's overcast
Just drop the act
We were fine but then we took it way too fast.
Feeling low/ Nowhere to go/ when you left you took a piece of my soul.
Now I'm alone/ cuts to the bone/ Have to keep myself from picking up my phone.
Living like we're in a fairy tale.
Defied the wind and then we set sail.
Couldn't make it out the stormy gale.
Took on water all we do is bail.
It's overcast
No this can't last
You tell me let it go and put it in the past.
It's overcast
Just drop the act
We were fine but then we took it way too fast.
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I liked this a lot, and the vocals are pretty good!
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Republished
Word placement, Vocal mastering. Added an EQ and compressor on vocals (De - Esser)
Sounds a ton better now :)
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Noice vocals m7 :)
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You totally should
Yeah - don’t post it anywhere... I’ve had trouble with people doing that in the past, and I’d prefer not to have issues now or in the future.
Yesssss tropical house XD
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and then remix it into tropical house xD
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for shits and giggles, I might attempt to do a cover lmao
probs won't post it anywhere tho xD
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Republished
Editsssss
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Just so everyone knows, I have some huge edits to make with this. The seconds verse’s vocals need adjustment, the guitar needs stereo widening, and some other more minor things :)
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Love this, but the drop feels weak, except for the 2nd part, I really liked that, and the vocals are SO good
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I like dis boio :D :D
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Lol - I think I’m going to hide this :/ kinda not that great
