It's just a thing that could easily and quickly fixed, or improved in the future, but I respect personal space, I mean, I don't want to overload my tracks with EQs mixing and mastering if I just goddamn genuinely enjoy them, for me it kills the nice experience sometimes. So I respecc.
Firstly lemme just get this clear with before I say my thoughts on this (this is not critiquing ut track I'm just giving u production tips) ok soo I like the concept of this track it's real simple, real clean. But I do hear some clipping in some parts, that could be fixed by one. Sidechaining the kick, two EQ that melody and cymbals so that they sit in the correcr freq. But anyways still good tho