this is cool, but I just couldn't get INTO it. You were right these drops are weird but I like that they feel so abstract lol Nice work though! Interesting composition, and a good job on the vocals! those reverb effects and pitch effects were awesome! Did someone make those edits in AT or another software? Cool sounds overall. Second drop is my fave
You could make the 808 in the second drop thiccer to make it have more impact, like distort it a little bit and put an exciter and boom, super beefy bass that has a lot of weight to increase the impact of the second drop