Promoting a song I'm proud of

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Ember Jade

this is a Lil song I cooked up this weekend and I'm really proud of it if yall could give it a bit of attention! You need to listen to The Last Straw by Ember Jade on audiotool The Last Straw

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    Zir0h

    Oh and lastly, thank you for sharing! It surely takes a lot of courage to put something that is meaningful to you out into the world and to open yourself up to criticism. Stay humble and open-minded to learning new things and you'll be fine 💜

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    Zir0h

    First crit, learn to read and write music. Learn basic music theory. Learn how notes are put together.

    I'm not trying to be mean or anything but this sounds like something a 4 year old made. There's no rhyme or rhythm to it. Now, it doesn't necessarily have to be musical. There's tons of experimental and atmospheric music out there and people make tons of money making that stuff. If musical education is not something you find interesting, I might dabble in those genres as they typically don't require you to have an ear for music or even to really have to adhere to conventional music "norms" or the "correct way".

    Considering the length of this track and the number of sounds put into it, as well as the tracks cover art, I can see that you put a lot of love into this, which I think is extremely important. I would continue to harness that love and keep making things that you think are fun and make you happy. If you'd ever like more critique or advice feel free to drop by my channel and post a question on my wall.

    In closing, this is not something that i enjoyed listening to, but if you find that writing music is something you are really interested in, definitely a look into learning some basic music theory.

    Have a great day!

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      Ember Jade

      I learned from my friend @Kengy9II he makes really cool soundtracks which are probably better than mine lol if you're up for binging his songs, he makes bgms for his animation series

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      Zir0h

      I had a feeling! It seemed really well constructed for how experimental/soundtrack it seemed. I just wasn't sure tbh.

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      Ember Jade

      i know basic music theory

      i took music classes throughout elemntary and was in band all of middle school and 1 year in high school its just the way i express emotion and story into a soundtrack ^^ but thank you!

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    Ember Jade

    criticism is much appreciated