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NEED HELP WITH A SONG

Foxhound098 · started 2024-01-09 18:40 · updated 2024-01-09 23:28

Hi guys i'm wirting a song for a gf and i have the lryics but i wanted opinions on what the actuall song will sond like feel free to give me advice

Comments (7)

anonymous user
2024-01-09 21:25 · 2024-01-09

I might be able to help

2024-01-09 23:06 · 2024-01-09

hey what's up, and great any help is appreciated. Though keep in my this will be played on an electric guitar

Foxhound098 · reply
2024-01-09 23:17 · 2024-01-09

If you want i can give the lryics?

Foxhound098 · reply
2024-01-09 23:18 · 2024-01-09

just please don't copy them i haven't had them copyrighted yet

anonymous user · reply
2024-01-09 23:21 · 2024-01-09

okay

2024-01-09 23:28 · 2024-01-09

feel free to say whatever and if you think the words need changing let me know.

Her skin, her touch, they always seem to get things off my mind and i begin to wonder why.
Why she fell for me,but as soon as i hear her voice it always seems to be her skin
shining so brightly in the morning sun, her touch lighting me on fire with every little thing she does
Her eyes drawing me in closer, making me begin to wonder if this is all just a dream but the i see her face, i feel her touch
and i fall oh so deep in those eyes.

2024-01-09 23:28 · 2024-01-09

Now the majority of the song repeats once or twice